Wow this is the MOST horrifying thing I have read in, uhhhh, YEARS
Um. This is terrifying.
This is like the horror story retelling of that news article from a few years ago about a woman living in an apartment’s ceiling and eating a guys leftovers.
No. I don’t know why image descriptions bother you, anon, and frankly I don’t particularly care. I use image descriptions so that my blog is accessible to blind and visually-impaired readers. It’s not a stylistic choice, and I don’t care if it offends your aesthetic sensibilities. If there’s some problem with the way I format the descriptions that is causing a problem for you, please let me know and I’ll see if I can address it. But if your problem is that I’m adding extra text in order to help out my disabled followers, then all I can say is
[Image Description: Headline reading “I don’t know how to explain to you that you should care about other people”]
When a character doesn’t realize they’ve been, like, shot or whatever and they hand brushes against their side and comes away wet with blood, and they’re just staring at it like wtf is this and then their knees just totally give out on them and they sink down, maybe gasping a little as the reality finally hits them. That’s good stuff.
I see that, and raise you a character who knows they’ve been shot, but waits until the rest of their crew is out of sight to put their hand against the slowly spreading stain of blood on their shirt, then trying to steady their breathing so they can follow without letting on how injured they are.
Okay but like the character who doesn’t realize they’ve been hurt trying to see if everyone else is okay only to slowly realize that everyone is looking at them with mounting horror. Then they touch their side to find it’s wet and oh no
all 3 of you are evil but i admire, respect, and fear you